He could see a strange light in Wade’s eyes, but he remembered that from before the experiments had started; a simple blaze of delight that turned up whenever Wade felt challenged by something
I loved this. I realized I never left feedback for this chapter. There are so many great things here...Victor understanding Remy when Logan does not, Victor breaking the branch to get Wade and Gambit's attention, all of the V/L scene but especially Victor's howl upon penetration. I especially loved Victor and Wade going at it without regard for hurting each other. Although Victor is always going to be the dom there, it's v cool how they've become real equals in one thing at least, and it was fun to see them challenging each other.
I can't believe how long this story is getting. Generally when they get this long, and are written this fast, quality suffers, but this one keeps getting better and better. Forget us reading 170k words...you writing them, and having them it be this good is a lot more impressive.
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Date: 2009-08-11 01:55 am (UTC)I loved this. I realized I never left feedback for this chapter. There are so many great things here...Victor understanding Remy when Logan does not, Victor breaking the branch to get Wade and Gambit's attention, all of the V/L scene but especially Victor's howl upon penetration. I especially loved Victor and Wade going at it without regard for hurting each other. Although Victor is always going to be the dom there, it's v cool how they've become real equals in one thing at least, and it was fun to see them challenging each other.
I can't believe how long this story is getting. Generally when they get this long, and are written this fast, quality suffers, but this one keeps getting better and better. Forget us reading 170k words...you writing them, and having them it be this good is a lot more impressive.