For which bit, or just generally? And yep, I understand it - that's part of the reason why I did an incredibly long build up (for me!) before getting into the more sexual aspects. Jumping straight into things would seem wrong, but there's elements throughout that just hint at things, personality types that can settle remarkably easily. Mind you, I also had the phrase "None of us is who we appear to be on the outside" quite firmly in my mind at the time of writing too, which helped... !
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Date: 2010-04-09 09:40 pm (UTC)