So happy to see a new chapter! well written as usual, I love all the random humor. I think I've said this before but, you've created a villian I can really hate! Its at that point in the story where it seems like everything will go wrong again and by the time they rescue Victor and Remy they'll be so messed up it cant possibly have a happy ending. This bad guy gives me a mind of doom, he seems too smart to have overlooked anything but I still have hope that he has.
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Date: 2010-07-06 12:58 am (UTC)I think I've said this before but, you've created a villian I can really hate! Its at that point in the story where it seems like everything will go wrong again and by the time they rescue Victor and Remy they'll be so messed up it cant possibly have a happy ending. This bad guy gives me a mind of doom, he seems too smart to have overlooked anything but I still have hope that he has.
Nice work, cant wait for the next installment :)